Today's task is to evaluate our shop announcements and improve them. My previous message was:
Welcome! I'm adding new inventory almost every day. Hope you enjoy looking. :-)
I've changed it to:
Welcome! I add new inventory almost every day, so be sure to check back often. Feel free to email or convo me to discuss custom work.
My shop policies are outlined in my profile. For more about me and what I make, have a look at my blog at http://www.caelista.com.
Hope you enjoy looking. :-)
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I do think it's an improvement, although fewer items are visible on the page now.
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